Shortening

So often when I write a poem

And wait for a critique,

My husband, who’s my audience,

Believes it needs a tweak.

 

That last verse isn’t needed –

It’s a summary, you know.

Of course I do, but that way

It’s tied up, complete with bow.

 

I read the piece again, his way,

And often, he’s correct.

A shorter version would provide

The ending you’d expect.

 

But there are times I disagree

And keep the extra verse,

Which I think makes it better

(Though my husband thinks it’s worse).