I like my poem the way it is
But
thanks for your suggestion.
I
do not plan to use it but
It
brings to mind a question –
Is
unsolicited advice
A
help or just annoying?
Perhaps
it’s good if someone’s spirits
Are
in need of buoying.
Or
in a case I read about,
An
expert made a sighting
Of
a mole on someone’s neck
Where
cancer cells required fighting.
In
certain cases, butting in
May
help a situation
And
those on the receiving end
May
feel appreciation…
But
in a poem, a typo’s
A
correction that it's needing
Yet all advice beyond that
Many poets won’t be heeding.
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